Today
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is a beautiful day.
Because a lot of snow has come early to work.
English is very difficult.
Iwish to speak English very well.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름][이름],
I'm so happy to see your message here for the first time. I hope you can do this often. ^^
I wish to see and experience the snow there. ^^
Take care, see you tomorrow.
---connie---
Today is a beautiful day.
>> CorrectBecause a lot of snow has come early to work.
>> Due to the snow, I came home early from work. English is very difficult.
>> CorrectIwish to speak English very well.
>> Correct
>> Of course you can, let's do it together !!!
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