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1. How much money do you have left?
2. There aren't many oranges on the table.
3. There are a lot of people who would like to come to the party.
4. Unfortunately, there is little wine left in the bottle.
5. He has a few friends in Los Angeles.
Good evening joey.
Did you have a good day.
Today was a waiting day. I went to hospital at 10 a.m. Some private hospital need not to make reservation. So we went to hospital and then made a reservation. But there were too many people. So we waited for a long time. Doctor treated my wife at 11 a.m.
And the result of treatment was good. No problem. We arrived in the home at 2 p.m. so today was waiting day. in the Afternoon I prepared to company’s work for tomorrow, and I helped wife with the housework and the grocery shopping.
Sleep well! Good night!
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I have a good day, and I hope were the same. Happy Monday! That\'s sad when you waited for a long time. Maybe next time you might still want to make a reservation even if it is not necessary for you not to wait again that long. And that\'s good if your wife is feeling better already, you\'re such a very good student and a husband too. So keep up the good work you perfected the answers.
Teacher Joey
1. How much money do you have left?
>> CORRECT2. There aren\'t many oranges on the table.>> CORRECT3. There are a lot of people who would like to come to the party.>>CORRECT4. Unfortunately, there is little wine left in the bottle.>>CORRECT5. He has a few friends in Los Angeles.
>>CORRECT
Good evening joey.
>> Good evening Joey.Did you have a good day.
>>Did you have a good day?Today was a waiting day. I went to hospital at 10 a.m.
Some private hospital need not to make reservation.
>>CORRECT
>> (OR) Some private hospitals don\'t need to have reservation.
So we went to hospital and then made a reservation.
>>CORRECT
But there were too many people.
>>CORRECT
So we waited for a long time.
>>CORRECT
Doctor treated my wife at 11 a.m.
>>The doctor has treated my wife at 11a.m.And the result of treatment was good. No problem.
>>CORRECT
We arrived in the home at 2 p.m. so today was waiting day.
>>We arrived home at 2 p.m.
in the Afternoon I prepared to company\'s work for tomorrow, and I helped wife with the housework and the grocery shopping.
>>In the afternoon I prepared my work for tomorrow at the company, and helped my wife with household and then we went shopping.
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