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2011-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hello~ My dear 비앙카~ ^^ The weather is very cold. and my home's too. I think ( )it is warm your national. so I envy you^^*,, I founded that mean 'grandchildren'. I'm so sorry I don't know many words.

강사 첨삭

Hi there,

Yes, it is warmer here. You can come here to experience it. kkk. By the way don't worry too much about the words you don't know. Take it one step at a time. I know you will be good in English because you are diligent.

See you later.

Hello~ My dear 비앙카~
>>Correct
^^
The weather is very cold.

>>Correct
and my home's too.

>>And it also cold in my home.
I think ( )it is warm your national.

>> I think it warm in your country (Philippines).
So I envy you^^*,,

>>Correct

I founded that mean 'grandchildren'.

>> I found the meaning of grandchildren.
I'm so sorry I don't know many words.

>>Correct

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