Today diary
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Hello! Today is 11/19 Friday.
First I got the test in the accedamy.
It is very difficult beacause it is difficult Math-triangle....
but I did my best and.... I wrong 68/4!
I answer 64 problem!!!!!
second, at the school, We were taking music classes.
Our music teacher said, \"Okay, Here everybody? please listen, We prograss The Singin contest on desember.\"
I promise singing with my friend. I will sing \"VVS\". It is very good song to me This song appear program \'Show ME The Money 9\'. I will practice hard!!!
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Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
but I did my best and.... I wrong 68/4!
I answer 64 problem!!!!!
I promise singing with my friend. I will sing \"VVS\". It is very good song to me This song appear program \'Show ME The Money 9\'. I will practice hard!!!
First I got the test in the accedamy.
>>First, we had a test in the academy.
It is very difficult beacause it is difficult Math-triangle....
>>It is very difficult because it is about Math triangles.
but I did my best and.... I wrong 68/4!
>>I did my best and I only had 4 mistakes.
I answer 64 problem!!!!!
>>>I got 64 correct answers.
second, at the school, We were taking music classes.
second, at the school, We were taking music classes.
>>At the second half, we had our music class.
Our music teacher said, \"Okay, Here everybody? please listen, We prograss The Singin contest on desember.\"
>>Our music teacher said, \"Okay, is everybody here? please listen, we will go and through the singing contest on December.\"
I promise singing with my friend. I will sing \"VVS\". It is very good song to me This song appear program \'Show ME The Money 9\'. I will practice hard!!!
>>I promised my friend that we will song together. I will sing \"VVS\". It is a very good song for me this song appeared in a program \'Show ME The Money 9\'. I will practice hard!!!
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