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2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Today, I had only one class ‘Innovation, Entrepreneurship and Policy’ given in English only. In the class, we discussed ‘what is the difference between invention and innovation’. Because there were many foreign students in the class, many students told their ideas freely and positively. I wanted to talk about many things related the subject but I couldn’t say anything. I felt stuffy because my speaking skill is too poor but I felt relieved because one of my friends couldn’t speak English well either. Tomorrow, I have other classes spoken in English so I have to read some articles about it. I think that I’ll encounter many challenges in this semester because I enrolled many English lectures. However, I’m full of moale and I’ll study hard in this semester.

강사 첨삭

My Dear [Name], It’s nice to share your thoughts to someone.I’m very positive that in time,  you will come out of your shell. Reading would be a great help for you to improve your skills and I feel glad that your perserverance is in its utmost..Remember, Practice makes perfect!^^ Godbless, T. Faye Here are you corrections: Today, I had only one class ‘Innovation, Entrepreneurship and Policy’ given in English only. >> Today, I only had one class, ‘Innovation, Entrepreneurship and Policy’ given in English.  In the class, we discussed ‘what is the difference between invention and innovation’. >>In class, we discussed ‘what is the difference between invention and innovation’. Because there were many foreign students in the class. >>CORRECT^^ Many students told their ideas freely and positively. >>CORRECT^^ I wanted to talk about many things related the subject but I couldn’t say anything. >>I wanted to talk about many things related to the subject but, I couldn't say anything. I felt stuffy because my speaking skill is too poor but I felt relieved because one of my friends couldn’t speak English well either. >>CORRECT^^Tomorrow, I have other classes spoken in English so I have to read some articles about it. >>CORRECT^^ I think that I’ll encounter many challenges in this semester because I enrolled many English lectures. >>CORRECT^^ However, I’m full of moale and I’ll study hard in this semester.>>However, I’m full of morale and I’ll study hard this semester.

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