Today Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was very excited!
Above all, I presented my thoght in English in the class, and it was the first time I spoke something in English in front of people. Professor asked 'What Public Administration was. I answered that it was the distribution some goods and service efficiently and fairly. Although it was not the perfect answer, I felt very excited and confident.
Also, I met my friends until late night. We drunk a lot of beer and talked about ourselves because we couldn't meet for 2 months. I came back home very lately and my mother was angry at me. However, it was a great time.
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Oooopppps you were scolded by your Mom ;)). Anyway, maybe you should be careful next time, hahahah. Thank you for dropping bye,
See you tomorrow,
---faye---
Today was very excited!
>> Today was very exciting!Above all, I presented my thoght in English in the class, and it was the first time I spoke something in English in front of people.
>>I presented my thoughts in the English class, and it was my first time to talk about something using English language in front of an audience.
Professor asked 'What Public Administration was. I answered that it was the distribution some goods and service efficiently and fairly.
>> My professor asked me about Public Administration. I said that it is the distribution of some goods and service efficiently and fairly.
Although it was not the perfect answer, I felt very excited and confident.
>> Although it wasn’t perfect, I felt very excited and confident. Also, I met my friends until late night.
>> I also met my friends until late at night.
We drunk a lot of beer and talked about ourselves because we couldn't meet for 2 months.
>> We drank a lot of beer and talked about ourselves because we couldn't meet for 2 months.
I came back home very lately and my mother was angry at me.
>> I went home very late and my mother was angry at me.
However, it was a great time.
>> However, I had a great time.
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