Today Diary

2011-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Today, I met my friend who prepare the C.P.A.(Certified Public Accountant) test. Because we are all seniors now, we have to prepare our uncertain future. However, my friend failed the primary exam which is taken in February. We ate lunch together and I console him in his misfortune. Also, we caught up on each other’s lives over a meal. About 3 hours later, I’ll meet my alumni who are the member of my club. We reserved a cheap hotel and we’ll drink beer and talk a lot through the night. I'm a little tired but it's okay. I'll have a good time tonight and then take a lot of rest on weekend.

강사 첨삭

  Hi there Min Joo!! It always delights me to see your composition posted here, thanks for your effort and I hope you continue writing everyday. ^ _ ^  It’s a very great Friday and I hope that you are enjoying your night, I know you’re tired from your tasks.  Have a nice weekend and I’ll talk to you again on Monday.  ~ (>_< ) T. Faye~   Today, I met my friend who prepare the C.P.A.(Certified Public Accountant) test. >> Today, I met my friend who prepared for the CPA (Certified Public Accountant) examination.  Because we are all seniors now, we have to prepare our uncertain future. >> Because we are all seniors now, we have to prepare ourselves for our uncertain future.  However, my friend failed the primary exam which is taken in February. >> Sadly however, my friend failed the preliminary exam which he took last February. We ate lunch together and I console him in his misfortune. >> We ate lunch together and I consoled him for his misfortune. OR >> We ate lunch together and I comforted him.     Also, we caught up on each other’s lives over a meal. >> Also, we caught up on each other’s lives while eating our meals.About 3 hours later, I’ll meet my alumni who are the member of my club. >> About 3 hours later, I’ll meet my university batchmate who is a member of my club.  We reserved a cheap hotel and we’ll drink beer and talk a lot through the night. >> We made a reservation at a cheap hotel and we plan to drink beer and chat all throughout the night.  I'm a little tired but it's okay. >> Good sentence. I'll have a good time tonight and then take a lot of rest on weekend. >> I'll have a good time tonight and then take a lot of rest on the weekend.     ~ Enjoy drinking later! ~  

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