Today Diary

Today was my friend’s wedding day. I went to the ceremony in order to celebrate her wedding. She is 1 year older than me. Also, her husband is in the same age with her. I met her first at the amateur orchestra in which I have participated since 2006. She was much more beautiful than ever. Also, she looked very happy. I and my friends who participate in the orchestra played wedding songs for the couple. The ceremony was held in the restaurant located nearby Han River. Their interiors and dishes were very romantic. I want to hold my wedding ceremony in the restaurant too. It was a little hard time because my cello is too heavy to carry. However, it was a great time too.

Hello [이름]!  Your mom told me that you were sick… Get well soon and drink a lot of water… I hope that we will have class tomorrow! We can talk about your friend’s wedding tomorrow! I love weddings! T.Faye Here are some of your corrections: Today was my friend’s wedding day. >>Correct!I went to the ceremony in order to celebrate her wedding. >>Correct!She is 1 year older than me. Also, her husband is in the same age with her. >>Correct. >>She is 1 year older than me. Her husband is of the same age as her.I met her first at the amateur orchestra in which I have participated since 2006. >>I first met her at the amateur orchestra in which I have participated since 2006.She was much more beautiful than ever. Also, she looked very happy. >>Correct!I and my friends who participate in the orchestra played wedding songs for the couple.>>Me and my friends who participated in the orchestra played wedding songs for the couple.The ceremony was held in the restaurant located nearby Han River. >>The ceremony was held in the restaurant near Han River.Their interiors and dishes were very romantic. >>Correct!I want to hold my wedding ceremony in the restaurant too.>>Correct! >>I would like to have my wedding in that restaurant too.It was a little hard time because my cello is too heavy to carry. >>I had a little bit of a hard time because my cello was too heavy to carry.However, it was a great time too. >>However, I had a great time.