Today Diary

2011-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Today I met my best friend, EunHee. We have been a friend for 8 years. I think we are very different. I’m a person punctual, urgent and a little impatient. Compared with me, she is always slow to anger and easygoing. Whenever we meet, I always wait for her at least 15 minute. Actually I can’t understand how we could be a friend. However, I think that there are a lot of things I can learn from her. She is relatively more independent and adventurous than me. She said that she has a plan to go to Florida alone in this summer. Also, she had been to U.K. by herself last 1 year. I'm envy her. However, she gave me a lot of tips to go abroad. I am going to go abroad in this summer with this information. Today, the time with her was very exciting and funny.

강사 첨삭

Well they say that birds with the same feather flock together but on the contrary they also say that opposites attract, in such a way that you guys compliment each other, just like what you’ve said you learn some things from her and I think she also learns some things from you, guess that is the beauty of your friendship! -T.Faye-   Today I met my best friend, EunHee. >>correctWe have been a friend for 8 years. >>We have been friends for 8 years.I think we are very different. >>correctI’m a person punctual, urgent and a little impatient. >>I’m punctual, always in a hurry and a little impatient.Compared with me, she is always slow to anger and easygoing. >>Compared to me, she is always patient and easygoing.Whenever we meet, I always wait for her at least 15 minute. >>Whenever we meet I always wait for her for at least 15 minutes.Actually I can’t understand how we could be a friend.>>Actually I can’t understand how we became friends.However, I think that there are a lot of things I can learn from her. >>correctShe is relatively more independent and adventurous than me. >>correctShe said that she has a plan to go to Florida alone in this summer. >>She said that she has a plan to go to Florida alone this summer.Also, she had been to U.K. by herself last 1 year. >>Also, she had been to U.K. by herself last year.I'm envy her. However, she gave me a lot of tips to go abroad. >>I envy her. However, she gave me a lot of tips when going abroad.I am going to go abroad in this summer with this information.>>I am going abroad this summer and follow her tips.Today, the time with her was very exciting and funny. >>Today, the time I spent with her was veru exciting and fun!

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