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2011-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Today it was rainy outside. Many people in korea was scared becuase it probably was radioactive rain which came from Japan. The authority announced that it was not radioactive rain. However, nobody believed that announcement. I didn't trust it, either. Therefore, I prepared a big umbrella and put a mask on my face on the way to go to the school. And then, I took a quiz in the class 'Theory Of International Trade Policy'. There were 20 multiple choice questions and 10 short answer questions. Almost of questions asked the name of political economists or trade theory. It was a P/NP quiz, and I think that I will pass it. When I came back home, I feel very tired. However, my mather made me a 'chicken soup' so I was also happy today.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I'm glad to know that the rain wasn't radioactive, and that you took precautionary measures to keep yourself from radiation. Always keep safe and I'll see you later! -T. Faye-   Today it was rainy outside. >>CORRECT >>It was rainy outside today. [>>better]Many people in korea was scared becuase it probably was radioactive rain which came from Japan. >>Many people in Korea were scared because it they thought that it probably was radioactive rain that came from Japan.The authority announced that it was not radioactive rain.  >>The authorities announced that it was not radioactive rain.However, nobody believed that announcement. >>CORRECTI didn't trust it, either.  >>I didn't trust it either.Therefore, I prepared a big umbrella and put a mask on my face on the way to go to the school. >>That is why I prepared a big umbrella and put a mask on my face on the way to school.And then, I took a quiz in the class 'Theory Of International Trade Policy'. >>Then I took a quiz in the class Theory of International trade Policy.There were 20 multiple choice questions and 10 short answer questions. >>CORRECT Almost of questions asked the name of political economists or trade theory. >>Almost all questions asked the name of political economists or trade theories [or is it theorists?]It was a P/NP quiz, and I think that I will pass it. >>CORRECTWhen I came back home, I feel very tired.] >>When I came back home I felt very tired.However, my mather made me a 'chicken soup' so I was also happy today. >>However my mother made me chicken soup so I was also happy today.

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