Today Diary

Nowadays, the weather is so nice because the spring time already come. The weather is warm and clear. Also, the sunshine was very beautiful. Today I had 3 hours between two classes. It was really sad to be alone in this wonderful weather. I was extremely bored to death so I went to the department store which is nearby my college. I shopped around stores and looked for something special. Finally, I found the snacks which were made with green laver, wasabi, peas. I was curious about them, so I bought and ate them. Oh, my god. Their tastes were really strange. Green laver snack smelled fishy. Also, wasabi snack stung my nose. Only was peas snack taste normal. I think that I will not eat them anymore. It surely wasn’t worth the money I paid to buy them.e

Hello [이름]! Thank you for sharing your experience with me. I hope that I could also taste this kind of snacks. See you again tomorrow!

T.Jasmin

Nowadays, the weather is so nice because the spring time already come.

>> Today the weather is so nice because its spring time already.
The weather is warm and clear.

>>Correct
Also, the sunshine was very beautiful.

>> And the sunshine is very beautiful.
Today I had 3 hours between two classes.

>> Correct
It was really sad to be alone in this wonderful weather.

>> It is really sad to be alone in this wonderful weather.
I was extremely bored to death so I went to the department store which is nearby my college.

>> Correct
I shopped around stores and looked for something special.

>> I roamed around the store and I looked for something special.
Finally, I found the snacks which were made with green laver, wasabi, peas.

>>Correct
I was curious about them, so I bought and ate them.
>> I was curious about it, so I bought and ate it.
Oh, my god. Their tastes were really strange.

>>Oh, my God, the tastes were really strange.
Green laver snack smelled fishy. Also, wasabi snack stung my nose.

>> The green laver snacks smell fishy and the wasabi snacks sting my nose.
Only was peas snack taste normal.
>> Only the pea’s snacks taste normal.
I think that I will not eat them anymore.

>> In my opinion, I can’t eat this kind of snacks anymore.
It surely wasn’t worth the money I paid to buy them.e

>>It wasn’t surely worth the money I paid to buy these snacks.