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2011-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Today, I met a friend who has been to Europe for last 1 month. He talked about his travel over lunch. He said that he was really excited when he saw Mont Saint Michel located in France. When we were young, we have ever played a computer game ‘the Age of discovery’ In the game, we voyaged on the five oceans and found many famous historical places in the world. At that time, I extremely liked it and I often played it all over nights. Also, Mont Saint Michel was one of the important places in the game. He said that he was really surprised because Mont Saint Michel in the game was really similar with the real one. I could understand how he had felt. After meeting him, I really want to go to Europe to see those kinds of stuffs.

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Hi there! I am very happy to know that your friend was able to see Mont Saint Michel. Sometimes, it is really good and fun to look for historical places and to learn more about history because the past, in a way, influences the present. Anyway, I'll see you tomorrow! -T. Faye-   Today, I met a friend who has been to Europe for last 1 month. >> Today, I met my friend who stayed in Europe for a month. He talked about his travel over lunch. >> Correct. He said that he was really excited when he saw Mont Saint Michel located in France. >> Correct. >> He said that he was really excited when he saw Mont Saint Michel which is located in France. When we were young, we have ever played a computer game ‘the Age of discovery’ >> When we were young, we have played a computer game entitled The Age of Discovery. In the game, we voyaged on the five oceans and found many famous historical places in the world. >> Correct. At that time, I extremely liked it and I often played it all over nights. >> Correct. Also, Mont Saint Michel was one of the important places in the game. >> Correct. He said that he was really surprised because Mont Saint Michel in the game was really similar with the real one. >> Correct. I could understand how he had felt. >> Correct. >> I can totally understand how he felt. After meeting him, I really want to go to Europe to see those kinds of stuffs. >> Correct.

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