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2011-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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It seemed like a long time since I had studied with you. In today's class, I had a little hard time becuase I didn't use English at all last few days However, It was great to talk with you in English. I was really busy for a week becuase I have to prepare the mid-term exam. I have one more exam next tuesday and I'm really tired of it. Also, I have to write weekly assay after reading 3 articles about 'social capital' until sunday midnight. Moreover, I have two group assignment. One is about innovation and entreprenuership and another is about public policy. Still I'm busy but I really like the time learning English with you. I think that it is very helpful. I will try hard to practice English.

강사 첨삭

IT was nice to talk with you again. And thanks for dropping by even if I know you're very busy. See you later. It seemed like a long time since I had studied with you. >>CORRECTIn today's class, I had a little hard time becuase I didn't use English at all last few days  >>In today's class, I had a bit of a hard time because I didn't use English at all during the last few days.However, It was great to talk with you in English. >>CORRECTI was really busy for a week becuase I have to prepare the mid-term exam. >>CORRECT but check your spelling with BECAUSE.I have one more exam next tuesday and I'm really tired of it. >>CORRECTAlso, I have to write weekly assay after reading 3 articles about 'social capital' until sunday midnight. >>CORRECT but the check your spelling with ESSAY.Moreover, I have two group assignment.  >>Moreover, I have two group assignments.One is about innovation and entreprenuership and another is about public policy. >>CORRECT. Check the spelling of ENTREPRENEURSHIP.Still I'm busy but I really like the time learning English with you.  >>CORRECTI think that it is very helpful. >>CORRECTI will try hard to practice English. >>CORRECT

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