Today' diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday sir [이름]! \\(^_^)/
How are you?
Did you have a good weekend?
It\'s good to hear from you! :)
Good job on your composition! ^^,
Thank you for sharing with me your feelings about you leaving for Vietnam. :)
I somehow find it scary to leave the place where you spent so much of your life.
I am also frightened of being in a new environment.
But, as they say, life begins outside your comfort zone.
Although you might have mixed feelings right now, I\'m sure you\'ll do good there. :)
It may be hard at first because you have to adjust to a lot of things, but I know you can do it! ^^,)
I\'m sure you\'ll be able to settle down and find new friends there.
I hope as we go along, you can share with me what your experiences will be in Vietnam. :D
Take care sir [이름] and enjoy the rest of your day.
I am looking forward to hearing from you in class! :)
Happy Monday! ^^,)
--- Teacher Jacey :)
Monday 14. November 2016
I try to diary that I leave for vietnam\'s life.
DID YOU MEAN
>> I will try to write a diary about my preparation for a new life in Vietnam.
I\'m going to Hanoi in Vietnam next week 22.
>> I\'m going to Hanoi, Vietnam next week, November 22.
OR
I will be leaving for Hanoi, Vietnam on November 22.
I quit my job. And then, I will start my second times life in Vietnam.
>> I recently quit my job and I will start a new life in Vietnam.
I\'m going to work for Samsung Display in Hanoi for 4 months.
>> Correct
And then, I\'m going to work for a head office in Ho Chi Minh City.
>> And then, I\'m going to work in a head office in Ho Chi Minh City.
I seem to be in a calm and to be good to look back my life.
DID YOU MEAN
>> I seem to be calm and good when I look back at my life.
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