Today' diary

2016-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Monday 14. November 2016 I try to diary that I leave for vietnam's life. I'm going to Hanoi in Vietnam next week 22. I quit my job. And then, I will start my second times life in Vietnam. I'm going to work for Samsung Display in Hanoi for 4 months. And then, I'm going to work for a head office in Ho Chi Minh City. I seem to be in a calm and to be good to look back my life.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday sir [이름]! \\(^_^)/

How are you?

Did you have a good weekend?


It\'s good to hear from you! :)

Good job on your composition! ^^,


Thank you for sharing with me your feelings about you leaving for Vietnam. :)

I somehow find it scary to leave the place where you spent so much of your life.

I am also frightened of being in a new environment.

But, as they say, life begins outside your comfort zone.


Although you might have mixed feelings right now, I\'m sure you\'ll do good there. :)

It may be hard at first because you have to adjust to a lot of things, but I know you can do it! ^^,)

I\'m sure you\'ll be able to settle down and find new friends there.


I hope as we go along, you can share with me what your experiences will be in Vietnam. :D

Take care sir [이름] and enjoy the rest of your day.


I am looking forward to hearing from you in class! :)

Happy Monday! ^^,)



--- Teacher Jacey :)




Monday 14. November 2016



I try to diary that I leave for vietnam\'s life.

DID YOU MEAN

>> I will try to write a diary about my preparation for a new life in Vietnam.



I\'m going to Hanoi in Vietnam next week 22.

>> I\'m going to Hanoi, Vietnam next week, November 22.

OR

I will be leaving for Hanoi, Vietnam on November 22.



I quit my job. And then, I will start my second times life in Vietnam.

>> I recently quit my job and I will start a new life in Vietnam.



I\'m going to work for Samsung Display in Hanoi for 4 months.

>> Correct



And then, I\'m going to work for a head office in Ho Chi Minh City.

>> And then, I\'m going to work in a head office in Ho Chi Minh City.



I seem to be in a calm and to be good to look back my life.

DID YOU MEAN

>> I seem to be calm and good when I look back at my life.



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