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2016-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Tuesday, 15 November, 2016 I reviewed and organized that I leraned business book. and then I ready for in our class with Jacey teacher. I watched the 300 sentesce lecture of diva Jessica on YouTube. Diva Jessica is very famous English teacher in Korea. I ready slowly everything for a new life in Vietnam. I was always running and walking at topsan in Changwon. I should get in shape. I met my senior called Jaehong Park. he said that he will cheer up me in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Good evening sir [이름]! :)

How was your second day of the week?

I hope you had a good one. ^^,)


It\'s nice to know that you\'re preparing for our classes.

That\'s a very good thing. :)


Now I am curious who Diva Jessica is. :D

I will try to search for her on the internet.


I appreciate you for trying your best to learn really hard.

I know learning English can be difficult, but just keep practicing so you can get used to it. :)

You can do it! \\(^_^)/



November 22 is fast approaching.

Just one more week and you\'ll be travelling to Vietnam.

You must feel very excited?

Do you also feel scared?


I hope to see you in class sir [이름]. ^^,)

Have a nice evening.



---- Teacher Jacey



Tuesday, 15 November, 2016

I reviewed and organized that I leraned business book.

>> I reviewed and organized what I learned in the business book.



and then I ready for in our class with Jacey teacher. 

>> And I am getting ready for my class with teacher Jacey.



I watched the 300 sentesce lecture of diva Jessica on YouTube.

>> I watched the \"300 Sentences\" lecture of Diva Jessica on YouTube today.



Diva Jessica is very famous English teacher in Korea.

>> Diva Jessica is a very famous English teacher in Korea.

OR

Diva Jessica is a popular English teacher here in Korea.



I ready slowly everything for a new life in Vietnam. 

>> I am slowly getting ready for a new life in Vietnam.



I was always running and walking at topsan in Changwon.

>> I always run and walk at Topsan, Changwon.



I should get in shape. 

>> Correct



I met my senior called Jaehong Park.

>> I met my senior whose name is Jaehong Park.



he said that he will cheer up me in Korea.

>> He said he will cheer me up here in Korea.


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