Today' diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening sir [이름]! :)
How was your second day of the week?
I hope you had a good one. ^^,)
It\'s nice to know that you\'re preparing for our classes.
That\'s a very good thing. :)
Now I am curious who Diva Jessica is. :D
I will try to search for her on the internet.
I appreciate you for trying your best to learn really hard.
I know learning English can be difficult, but just keep practicing so you can get used to it. :)
You can do it! \\(^_^)/
November 22 is fast approaching.
Just one more week and you\'ll be travelling to Vietnam.
You must feel very excited?
Do you also feel scared?
I hope to see you in class sir [이름]. ^^,)
Have a nice evening.
---- Teacher Jacey
Tuesday, 15 November, 2016
I reviewed and organized that I leraned business book.
>> I reviewed and organized what I learned in the business book.
and then I ready for in our class with Jacey teacher.
>> And I am getting ready for my class with teacher Jacey.
I watched the 300 sentesce lecture of diva Jessica on YouTube.
>> I watched the \"300 Sentences\" lecture of Diva Jessica on YouTube today.
Diva Jessica is very famous English teacher in Korea.
>> Diva Jessica is a very famous English teacher in Korea.
OR
Diva Jessica is a popular English teacher here in Korea.
I ready slowly everything for a new life in Vietnam.
>> I am slowly getting ready for a new life in Vietnam.
I was always running and walking at topsan in Changwon.
>> I always run and walk at Topsan, Changwon.
I should get in shape.
>> Correct
I met my senior called Jaehong Park.
>> I met my senior whose name is Jaehong Park.
he said that he will cheer up me in Korea.
>> He said he will cheer me up here in Korea.
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