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2016-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Wednesday, 16 November, 2016 I decide to memorize five sentence from today that It used usually sentence in America. And then, I will memorize five sentence business book. The sentence below are five sentence. 1. a piece of cake-식은죽 먹기 2.I'll be right back with you-금방올게 3.Any good ideas-좋은생각있어? 4.Better than nothing-없는것보다 낮지 5.Can I get a ride?-차좀 태워줘.) I Make up one's mind another thing. That's what don't forget to decide first^^ Today is pretty happy today.

강사 첨삭

A wonderful evening to you sir [이름]! ^^,)

How was your day?

I hope you\'re having a good one.


It\'s good to know that you\'re developing your own style of learning. ^^,)

Continue practicing and I\'m sure you\'ll get better.

Memorization is also one way of learning.

Don\'t forget to jot down the meaning of it and use it in your own sentence or incorporate it in your daily life. :)


I hope to see you in class later. :)

Enjoy the rest of you evening sir [이름]! ^^,)


--- Teacher Jacey :)




Wednesday, 16 November, 2016


I decide to memorize five sentence from today that It used usually sentence in America.

>> I decided to memorize five sentences today that is usually used in America.



And then, I will memorize five sentence business book.

>> And then, I will memorize five sentences in the business book.



The sentence below are five sentence.

>> The sentences below are the five sentences I memorized:

OR

Below are the five sentences I\'ve memorized. 



1. a piece of cake-식은죽 먹기

>> Correct



2.I\'ll be right back with you-금방올게

>> Correct



3.Any good ideas-좋은생각있어?

>> Any good ideas?



4.Better than nothing-없는것보다 낮지

>> Correct

OR

It\'s better than nothing.



5.Can I get a ride?-차좀 태워줘.)

>> Correct



I Make up one\'s mind another thing.

DID YOU MEAN:

>> I can\'t make up my mind.

OR

>> I let others decide for themselves.


That\'s what don\'t forget to decide first^^

>> That\'s why don\'t forget to decide first.

OR

That\'s why don\'t forget to make decision first.


Today is pretty happy today.

>> I am feeling very happy today.

OR

It\'s a happy day today.


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