Today' diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening sir [이름]! :)
Happy Thursday.
The weekend is nearly here!
Do you have any special plans? :)
How was your trip to Busan? :)
I hope you enjoyed it.
I\'m sorry to hear that you feel really exhausted.
Take a rest if you can.
I will talk to you later in class.
See you! ^^,)
--- Teacher Jacey :)
Thursday, 17 November, 2016
I am exhausted.
>> Correct
I went to Busan early.
>> I went to Busan early today.
I heard auto control lecture in Mitsubishi Korea from busan branch.
>> I heard an auto control lecture in Mitsubishi Korea from the branch in Busan.
I came back home lately.
>> I came home late.
So, I am exhausted.
>> Correct
OR
I feel very tired.
I am going to bed immediately after the class of Power English.
>> Correct
OR
I am going to bed immediately after my Power English class.
I memorize five sentence today.
>> I memorized five sentences today.
1. Don\'t get too serious.
>> Correct
2. Don\'t be scared.
>> Correct
3. Enjoy your meal. = Helf yourself.
>> Enjoy your meal. = Help yourself.
4. Forget it. -> you forget it something.
>> Forget it = forget about something
5. Give me a call.
>> Correct
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