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2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Thursday, 17 November, 2016 I am exhausted. I went to Busan early. I heard auto control lecture in Mitsubishi Korea from busan branch. I came back home lately. So, I am exhausted. I am going to bed immediately after the class of Power English. I memorize five sentence today. 1. Don't get too serious. 2. Don't be scared. 3. Enjoy your meal. = Helf yourself. 4. Forget it. -> you forget it something. 5. Give me a call.

강사 첨삭


Good evening sir [이름]! :)

Happy Thursday.

The weekend is nearly here!

Do you have any special plans? :)


How was your trip to Busan? :)

I hope you enjoyed it.

I\'m sorry to hear that you feel really exhausted.

Take a rest if you can.


I will talk to you later in class.

See you! ^^,)


--- Teacher Jacey :)




Thursday, 17 November, 2016

I am exhausted.

>> Correct




 I went to Busan early.

>> I went to Busan early today.


 I heard auto control lecture in Mitsubishi Korea from busan branch.

>> I heard an auto control lecture in Mitsubishi Korea from the branch in Busan.



I came back home lately.

>> I came home late.



So, I am exhausted.

>> Correct

OR

I feel very tired.



I am going to bed immediately after the class of Power English.

>> Correct

OR

I am going to bed immediately after my Power English class.



I memorize five sentence today.

>> I memorized five sentences today.



1. Don\'t get too serious. 

>> Correct



2. Don\'t be scared.

>> Correct



3. Enjoy your meal. = Helf yourself.

>> Enjoy your meal. = Help yourself.



4. Forget it. -> you forget it something.

>> Forget it = forget about something



5. Give me a call.

>> Correct



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