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I don\'t have class today so i got up very late
and then i searched about international activity to support k-water company because if i do international activity,these experience will help to find job and learn manythings about team work
but i should scout team member so i called some friends to join them this team work and i told about merit about this activity but just one friend want to join this team work other friends said thet need to consider this propose.
>> I don\'t have a class today so I got up very late, then I searched on the internet about international activities that support K-water companies. If I engage in international activities, the experiences will help me find a good job as well as learn many things such as team work. However, since I need to work with a team, I called some of my friends to form a group. I tried to convince my friends about the merits in joining such activities but I managed to persuade only one of them as the rest still had to think about my suggestion.
i can understand their thought if we do this activity we will be busy and we have a lot to do for in our life i hope they will join this activity this activity need to 4team members so i have make 4 team members if i make team members we have to make short video about water conservation eventhought i don\'t have idea about that
later i will make a good idea and we will be strong team and we will do many good experience i believe
>> I understand their reservations because if we engage in this kind of activity, we would become busier since we still have to focus on other things such as our studies. Nevertheless, I certainly hope that they would agree to join me as I need them to form a 4-member team. Once we have the required team, we need to make a short video about water conservation. I must admit that as of now, I don\'t have a plan for the video but I\'m going to think of one. I believe that our team is going to be a strong one and that we will experience many things together.
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