Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to hel
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Many people are worried about our future about development of AI robot because they might lose their job and nobody know what will happen soon. Recently, professor in UK has invented AI robot which has same appearance, voice and even thought as himself. I was shocked when I watched it on TV. We might not know who human is, someday after additional development. I am scared if robots have smarter than humans, if it attack people, few people can survive in the earth. We have watched various movies that showed world in the future. It doesn\'t look better life than now. However, it is absolutely true that there are a number of benefits for us using technologies. The most impressive technique I have seen is the AI feature that imitate the dead person. People who lost their loved family always miss them and want to see even in dream. AI technology makes people meet their family on the screen. We can talk with AI which has same voice with computerized human but there are still limitation.
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Many people are worried about our future about development of AI robot because they might lose their job and nobody know what will happen soon.
>>> Many people are worried about the development of AI robot because they might lose their job and nobody knows what will happen soon.
Recently, professor in UK has invented AI robot which has same appearance, voice and even thought as himself.
>>> Recently, a professor in the UK has invented an AI robot which have the same appearance, voice and even thought as himself.
I was shocked when I watched it on TV.
>>> CORRECT
We might not know who human is, someday after additional development.
>>> We might not distinguish who humans are, someday after some additional developments.
I am scared if robots have smarter than humans, if it attack people, few people can survive in the earth.
>>> I am scared if robots will be smarter than humans, if it attacks people, a few people can survive on the earth.
We have watched various movies that showed world in the future.
>>> We have watched various movies that showed the future world.
It doesn\'t look better life than now.
>>> Life doesn\'t seem better life than now.
However, it is absolutely true that there are a number of benefits for us using technologies.
>>> However, it is absolutely true that there are a number of benefits for us who are using technologies.
The most impressive technique I have seen is the AI feature that imitates the dead person.
>>> CORRECT
People who lost their loved family always miss them and want to see even in dream.
>>>People who lost their loved once always miss them and want to see them even in dreams.
AI technology makes people meet their family on the screen.
>>> CORRECT
We can talk with AI which has same voice with computerized human but there are still limitation.
>>> We can talk with AI which has the same voice with computerized human features but there are still limitations.
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