Today english lession
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Nice to meet you again.
I was busy yesterday when you called me.
I forgot to begin the lesson again. So I was confused from your calling.
I didn\'t know \'rock down for 6 months\' that you said.
so, I was ashamed. but I understood next talking with you.
I learned english from talking to someone without learning grammer. So I can talking with english. But almost konglish(english like korean language).
When I was middle &high school, I learned a grammer. But I forgot most of them. So I hope you consider my weak point for english skill.
During my 1 year, I will do my best to speak english well. Please help me.
See you tonight^^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Nice to meet you again.
I was busy yesterday when you called me.
I forgot to begin the lesson again. So I was confused from your calling.
I didn\'t know \'rock down for 6 months\' that you said.
so, I was ashamed. but I understood next talking with you.
I learned english from talking to someone without learning grammer.
When I was middle &high school, I learned a grammer. But I forgot most of them.
During my 1 year, I will do my best to speak english well. Please help me.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name],
>> CORRECT!
Nice to meet you again.
>> CORRECT!
I was busy yesterday when you called me.
>> CORRECT!
I forgot to begin the lesson again. So I was confused from your calling.
>> I forgot that I was about to begin the lesson again.
So I was confused from your calling.
>> So, I was confused when you called me.
I didn\'t know \'rock down for 6 months\' that you said.
>> I didn\'t get it, when you said \"lock down for 6 months\".
\"Lock down for 6 months\"
>> [ What I mean here is that our country might go under 4 to 6 months of quarantine. - Tricia ]
so, I was ashamed. but I understood next talking with you.
>> So, I felt embarrassed that I was not able to understand you.
>> [ It\'s totally okay [이름], I understand about your confusion. - Tricia ]
I learned english from talking to someone without learning grammer.
>> I learned English from talking to foreign people without learning grammar.
So I can talking with english. But almost konglish(english like korean language).
>> So I can talk in English. But almost Konglish (Korean-style English).
When I was middle &high school, I learned a grammer. But I forgot most of them.
>> When I was in middle and high school, I learned about grammar. But I forgot most of it.
So I hope you consider my weak point for english skill.
>> So I hope you will consider my weak point in English skills.
During my 1 year, I will do my best to speak english well. Please help me.
>> For my first year, I will do my best to speak English well. Please help me.
See you tonight^^
See you tonight^^
>> CORRECT!
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