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1. I think I can vote anywhere but there are voting areas be designed each person.
2. We are usually supposed to vote until 6pm and the people who are under quarantine can vote after 6pm
3. There are lots of people that want to do scuba diving but because of virus they can\'t do scuba diving now.
4. They are waiting until the corona virus disappears.
5. First of all it depends on person, if they want to get certificate, it usually takes 2days 3nights and if they want to experience only it takes about 2 hours.
6. When I don\'t have any customers, I\'m used to organize my diving equipment and do upload SNS to gather customer. I have to work hard during summer to take a rest during winter.
7. I sometimes feel so lonely but I Donny want to be interrupt. I just want to feel free as much as I can.
8. It depends on employee, where they work in the office or work in own house.
강사 첨삭
Hello Gony! Thank you for always actively participating during our class and for sharing your ideas with me!
-Teacher Abigail^^
1. I think I can vote anywhere but there are voting areas be designed each person.
>>I thought that I can vote anywhere but there are voting areas assigned for each person.
2. We are usually supposed to vote until 6pm and the people who are under quarantine can vote after 6pm
>>We can usually vote until 6 PM but those people who are under the quarantine can vote 6 PM onwards.
3. There are lots of people that want to do scuba diving but because of virus they can\'t do scuba diving now.
>>There are lots of people who wants to do scuba diving but because of the virus, they can\'t do scuba diving now.
4. They are waiting until the corona virus disappears.
>>They need to wait until the coronavirus disappears.
5. First of all it depends on person, if they want to get certificate, it usually takes 2days 3nights and if they want to experience only it takes about 2 hours.
>>First of all it depends on the person, if they want to get a certificate, it usually takes 2 days and 3 nights training but if they only want to experience it, it only takes about 2 hours.
6. When I don\'t have any customers, I\'m used to organize my diving equipment and do upload SNS to gather customer.
>>Whenever I don\'t have any customers, I usually organize my diving equipment and upload on SNS to gather customer.
I have to work hard during summer to take a rest during winter.
>>I have to work hard during summer so I can take a rest during winter.
7. I sometimes feel so lonely but I Donny want to be interrupt. I just want to feel free as much as I can.
>>Sometimes I feel so lonely but I don\'t want to be interrupted. I just want to be free as much as I can.
8. It depends on employee, where they work in the office or work in own house.
>>It depends on employees if they want to work in the office or at home.
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