today for homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!^^
Thank you for sharing me this beautiful short story about your parents.
I know that your parents are now very happy.^^
~Teacher Alice~
My mom and my aunt went to the same language school.
>>Correct!!
And they are close friends.They live in the same town.
>>Correct!!
Someday....My dad drived his car for my mom.
>>One day, my dad drove the car for my mom.
So my mom love him.my dad love her too.
>>That is why my mom love him and my dad love her too.
First my mom and dad becomed close friend.Littie by littie...
>>At first, my mom and my dad became friends then little by little until they became close friends.
My mom and dad love to each other.So our parents are marry.Our parents are happy.^^
>>My mom and my dad love each other. So, my parents got married, and now, my parents are happy.
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