today for homework

2013-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

My mom and aunt went to the same language school.And they are close friends.They live in the same town.Somday....my dad drived his car for my mom.So my mom love him.My dad love her too.First my mom and dad becomed close friend.Littie by littie...My mom and dad love to each other.So our parents are marry.Our parents are happy. ^^ 0

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!^^

Thank you for sharing me this beautiful short story about your parents.

I know that your parents are now very happy.^^

~Teacher Alice~

My mom and my aunt went to the same language school.

>>Correct!!

And they are close friends.They live in the same town.

>>Correct!!

Someday....My dad drived his car for my mom.

>>One day, my dad drove the car for my mom. 

So my mom love him.my dad love her too.

>>That is why my mom love him and my dad love her too.

First my mom and dad becomed close friend.Littie by littie...

>>At first, my mom and my dad became friends then little by little until they became close friends.

My mom and dad love to each other.So our parents are marry.Our parents are happy.^^

>>My mom and my dad love each other. So, my parents got married, and now, my parents are happy.

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