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2015-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Erine! My name is [이름]! <Question> Thomas Edison, the renowned inventor, is famous for having said, “Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent perspiration.” Do you agree with this definition of genius? Why or why not? => Yes,I agree with this defintion. Because, when I am young, I was not smart man. I liked to play with friend than study hard and I don't study very well. But, when I go to University, I study my major very very hard. last year, I became first student in my major! That's it. Thanks you.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^ This is the start of your homework writing class too!^^ I always provide this kind of homework because I can learn more things about my students\' life. Thank you for opening up and hope I can learn new things about you every time you write your homework. See you later!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Erine! My name is [이름]!>> Correct<Question>Thomas Edison, the renowned inventor, is famous for having said, “Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percentperspiration.” Do you agree with this definition of genius? Why or why not?=> Yes,I agree with this defintion. >> Yes, I agree with this definition/saying.Because, when I am young, I was not smart man. >> Because when I was young, I was not a smart woman.I liked to play with friend than study hard and I don\'t study very well. >> I liked to play/hang out with my friends than to study hard and I didn\'t study very well.But, when I go to University, I study my major very very hard. >> But when I have gone to unitversity, I study my major really hard.last year, I became first student in my major! >> Last year, I have started my first year in my university.That\'s it. Thanks you. >> That\'s it. Thank you.

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