Today Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Erine! My name is [이름]!
<Question>
Thomas Edison, the renowned inventor, is famous for having said, “Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percent
perspiration.” Do you agree with this definition of genius? Why or why not?
=> Yes,I agree with this defintion.
Because, when I am young, I was not smart man.
I liked to play with friend than study hard and I don't study very well.
But, when I go to University, I study my major very very hard.
last year, I became first student in my major!
That's it. Thanks you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
This is the start of your homework writing class too!^^
I always provide this kind of homework because I can learn more things about
my students\' life.
Thank you for opening up and hope I can learn new things
about you every time you write your homework.
See you later!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Erine! My name is [이름]!>> Correct<Question>Thomas Edison, the renowned inventor, is famous for having said, “Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety-nine percentperspiration.” Do you agree with this definition of genius? Why or why not?=> Yes,I agree with this defintion.
>> Yes, I agree with this definition/saying.Because, when I am young, I was not smart man.
>> Because when I was young, I was not a smart woman.I liked to play with friend than study hard and I don\'t study very well.
>> I liked to play/hang out with my friends than to study hard and I didn\'t study very well.But, when I go to University, I study my major very very hard.
>> But when I have gone to unitversity, I study my major really hard.last year, I became first student in my major!
>> Last year, I have started my first year in my university.That\'s it. Thanks you.
>> That\'s it. Thank you.
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