Today homework

2018-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny! Here is my homework I write, we can say "Fail is the mother of succeed" in Korea. Besides, My mom always says you must have something remaining even though you are fail. So never go down, don't make you disappointed for yourself.

강사 첨삭

Hello Won,

Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.

One step at a time.^^

Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^

Have a nice day!!!

T. Jeny

   


Hi Jeny!

>>correct
 Here is my homework I write,

>> Here is my homework which I wrote.
 we can say \"Fail is the mother of succeed\" in Korea.

>>We can say, \"Failure is the mother of success,\" in Korea.
 Besides, My mom always says you must have something remaining even though you are fail.

>>Besides, my mom always says that you must reserve something for yourself even though you fail. 

So never go down, don\'t make you disappointed for yourself.

>>So never feel down, don\'t feel disappointed with yourself.

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