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2018-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Q:Are cosmetics purely for physical appearances? In what ways? A: I would say about cosmetics that there several ways which show our looking not only physical as well as our mood. Basically they are used for cover our weakness, troubles on skin and depend on dust. It is skin care. and then we can also put things which have colour on eye, cheek, lip. when we do this, we feel different what we would like to use colour. In my case, It depends on my mood that moment. If I feel some gloomy, I'm more like using bright shadow, lip. In short, I can say when it comes to cosmetics there are sorts of reveal appearances physically, emotionally either.

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A: I would say about cosmetics that there several ways which show our looking not only physical as well as our mood. Basically they are used for cover our weakness, troubles on skin and depend on dust. It is skin care. and then we can also put things which have colour on eye, cheek, lip. when we do this, we feel different what we would like to use colour. In my case, It depends on my mood that moment. If I feel some gloomy, I\'m more like using bright shadow, lip.
In short, I can say when it comes to cosmetics there are sorts of reveal appearances physically, emotionally either.


I would say that cosmetics have several ways of usage, which are; to show our physical appearance as well as to express our moods. Basically, they are used to cover our weaknesses, trouble on skin, and to get rid of dusts also. It is a skin care, we can also put colors on our eyelids, cheek, and lips. When we do this, we feel different our mood also depends on the colors that we like to use. In my case, if I feel gloomy, I use bright eye shadows and lipsticks. In short, I can say that when it comes to cosmetics they sort of reveal appearances either physically or emotionally.

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