today homework

I hope you had a healthy lunch [이름]! ^^

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~Teacher Shanee^^,

Composition writing!
Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

i think both are important. 

>>> I think both are important.
 Because I have experienced it.

When the two conditions are satisfied, we can health
but i can not do it. kikikiki

>>> When exercising and balanced diet are constantly observed, we can be healthy. In my case, I doubt that I can do it. kikikiki
 Because there are too many delicious foods in the world~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

>>> Because there are too many delicious foods in the world.