Today I made a rolling paper!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi teacher Im [Name]! today was made a Rolling Paper!! do you know rolling paper? rolling paper is a like letter but, it is very long like snake. So the reason to i made a rolling paper is, this Friday is my 5 greades closing ceremony so I made a rolling paper with my friends for my class teacher like event. I hopely my teacher will be happy!! So my story is finish see you later paalam na !!
강사 첨삭
That sounds wonderful, Jenney! ^_^ I hope you can show me the rolling paper in our class tonight~ I\'m very excited to see it! I also find it adorable that you said goodbye to me using Tagalog. You sound like a natural Filipino kkk. It made me smile. :) 정말 감사합니다~ ^^
>> Hi, teacher. I\'m Jenney!
today was made a Rolling Paper!!
>> I made a rolling paper today!
do you know rolling paper?
>> CORRECT!
OR>> Are you familiar with a rolling paper?
rolling paper is a like letter but, it is very long like snake.
>> Rolling paper is like a letter, but it is very long like a snake.
So the reason to i made a rolling paper is, this Friday is my 5 greades closing ceremony so I made a rolling paper with my friends for my class teacher like event.
>> I made a rolling paper with my friends today in celebration of a closing ceremony on Friday.
I hopely my teacher will be happy!!
>> I hope my teacher will be happy!
So my story is finish see you later paalam na !!
>> My story is finished. See you later and paalam na!
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