Today I took a risk.
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After the class, I went a diet clinic to get an injection that disassemble fat. It was really hurt and it could result side effects but I took that risks and I expect to reduce my weight. I got 3 different kind of injection, so I was afraid of pain I have to endure. Also, expensive cost was the risk I have to take. But I overcame all of these and came back to home bravely.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing .
-T. Gabby :)
After the class, I went a diet clinic to get an injection that disassemble fat.
>> After the class, I went to a diet clinic to get an injection that disassemble fat.
It was really hurt and it could result side effects but I took that risks and I expect to reduce my weight.
>> It was really painful and it might have side effects on me but I took that risk and so I expect to reduce my weight.
I got 3 different kind of injection, so I was afraid of pain I have to endure.
>> I got 3 different kinds of injection. I was afraid of pain but I have endured it.
Also, expensive cost was the risk I have to take.
>> Correct.
But I overcame all of these and came back to home bravely.
>> Correct.
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