Today, I will go to Damyang

2010-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Today, I will go to Damyang. It's a famous place in Korea. The place is famous for bambu trees. I will go there with my family. We went there about 2years befor, and we're going to go there again. I like bambu trees because we can make many many things with bambu trees. And when I get there I want a little bambu tree. So I can get it home and plant it. I'm so exited. I have to get ready. Bye.

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Hi [이름],

Wow, that sounds interesting. Please tell me about it on Monday.

I have to go to Mcdonalds today with my niece. We뭠l eat sundae and chicken.

Have a great time [이름],

---connie---

Today, I will go to Damyang.

>> Correct

 It's a famous place in Korea.

>> COrrect

The place is famous for bambu trees.

>> That place is famous for bamboo trees.

I will go there with my family.

>> Correct

We went there about 2years befor, and we're going to go there again.

>> We went there about two years ago, and we뭨e going there again.

I like bambu trees because we can make many many things with bambu trees.

>> I like bamboo trees because we can make a lot of things out of it.

 And when I get there I want a little bambu tree.

>> When I get there I want to have a little bamboo tree.

So I can get it home and plant it. I'm so exited. I have to get ready. Bye.

>> So I can bring it home and plant it. I뭢 so excited, I have to get ready. Bye

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