Today, I will go to Damyang
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Wow, that sounds interesting. Please tell me about it on Monday.
I have to go to Mcdonalds today with my niece. We뭠l eat sundae and chicken.
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Today, I will go to Damyang.
>> Correct
It's a famous place in Korea.
>> COrrect
The place is famous for bambu trees.
>> That place is famous for bamboo trees.
I will go there with my family.
>> Correct
We went there about 2years befor, and we're going to go there again.
>> We went there about two years ago, and we뭨e going there again.
I like bambu trees because we can make many many things with bambu trees.
>> I like bamboo trees because we can make a lot of things out of it.
And when I get there I want a little bambu tree.
>> When I get there I want to have a little bamboo tree.
So I can get it home and plant it. I'm so exited. I have to get ready. Bye.
>> So I can bring it home and plant it. I뭢 so excited, I have to get ready. Bye
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