today i worry about you.

2010-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jammie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jaimme! It's me, NICK. Are you ok? I heard that you was sick.i'm sorry about that. You knowm, i worried about you during a day. Hope to be always fine. I'll be looking for hearing your nice and bueatiful voice tomorrow morning, By the way, Typhoon, which mentioned two day ago, was not hit the korea. i think, after this typhoon, it is end in summer, perfactly. umm..it is a time to bed. take care og yourself. Keep in mind..^^ Have a sweat night. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi Nick, thanks for the concern. I'm on my way to recovery. I'll see you later! Here are my corrections:
Hi Jaimme! It's me, NICK.
>>Correct!
Are you ok?
>>Correct! 
I heard that you was sick.i'm sorry about that.
>>I heard that you are sick. I'm sorry to hear that.
You knowm, i worried about you during a day.
>>You know, I'm worried about you.
Hope to be always fine. I'll be looking for hearing your nice and bueatiful voice tomorrow morning,
>>I hope that you will always be fine. I am looking forward to hearing your nice and beautiful voice tomorrow morning.
By the way, Typhoon, which mentioned two day ago, was not hit the korea.
>>By the way, the typhoon that I mentioned two days ago didn't hit Korea.
i think, after this typhoon, it is end in summer, perfactly.
>>I think after the typhoon, this summer will end perfectly.
umm..it is a time to bed.
>>Umm, it's time to go to bed.
take care og yourself. Keep in mind..^^
>>Take care of yourself, keep that in mind.
Have a sweat night. Bye~
>>Have a sweet night. Bye!

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