Today is friday!

2010-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is friday which all worker are waiting on. I also wait every friday. I have several somethings to do on this weekend. My wife said that we need baby stuffs for our daughter. So we have a plan to go shopping mall for buying that. When I got up morning today, it was 5:00 am. I truned on the computer and see a lecture which can be learned for English pronunciation. After that, I had a blackfast and washed. And then, I left home and I filled gas on my way office. Gas cost raised around 50 won per a liter. Just now, I am in my office. Today, I have to go business trip to chunchon which takes 2~3 hours by car from here. This business trip is for checking of construction which is for pharmaceutical plant.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,           Thank you for taking time to let me know about your activities. I hope you will enjoy your weekend with your family. Take care! See you later! xoxo. ~Ella   MY CORRECTIONS^^: Today is friday which all worker are waiting on. >> Today is Friday the day which all workers are waiting for.I also wait every friday. I have several somethings to do on this weekend. My wife said that we need baby stuffs for our daughter. So we have a plan to go shopping mall for buy that.>> I'm also looking forward to Fridays. I have several things to do this weekend. My wife said that we need baby stuffs for our daughter. So we have a plan to go shopping to buy those stuffs.When I got up morning today, it was 5:00 am. I truned on the computer and see a lecture which can be learned for English pronunciation. >> When I got up this morning at 5:00 am I turned on the computer and watched a lecture where I can learn English pronunciation. After that, I had a blackfast and washed.  >> After that I had a breakfast and I washed up.And then, I left home and I filled gas on my way office. Gas cost raised around 50 won per a liter.>>And then, I left home and I filled the gas on my way to the office. The gas cost raised at around 50 won per liter.Just now, I am in my office. Today, I have to go business trip to chunchon which takes 2~3 hours by car from here. >> I just arrived in my office now. I need to go to a business trip today in Chunchon which would take 2-3 hours by car.This business trip is for checking of construction which is for pharmaceutical plant. >>This business trip is for checking the construction site for the pharmaceutical plant.

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