Today is Monday
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Ella.
It's [이름].
As you reqested on last friday, I do homework as below.
I have to study English very well because I would like to see western movies without Korean subtiles.
She does not not have to learn something like pronunciation, grammer and pattern of English, becasue she is Ella who do English very well.
When we do presentation to clients for sales, dress code is usually a suit which is seen stylishly.
Last weekend, I studied about proposition which shoud be known in conversation.
For example, I think that "Call me later" is Ok.
But Ella, notice it to me that "Call me up later."
The "Up" should be inputted in this sentence.
Hehe! let me know your answer!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I hope you had a great weekend.
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it especially the ones where you used my name as an example.hehehe
fierce&love,
~Ella^^
Here are your corrections.
Hi! Ella.
>>correct
>> Hi Ella!It's [이름].
>>It's me [이름].As you reqested on last friday, I do homework as below.>>I have made my homework, as you have requested last Friday.
>>As you requested last Friday, I made my homework already.I have to study English very well because I would like to see western movies without Korean subtiles.
>>correct, but check the spelling of "subtitles".She does not not have to learn something like pronunciation, grammer and pattern of English, becasue she is Ella who do English very well.
>>My teacher Ella doesn't need to study pronunciation, grammar and English patterns anymore because she's already good at it. (Please check the spelling of words)When we do presentation to clients for sales, dress code is usually a suit which is seen stylishly.>>Whenever we do sales presentations to clients, our dress code is usually a suit which in our opinion is very stylish.
Last weekend, I studied about proposition which shoud be known in conversation.
>>Last weekend, I studied about preposition which is necesarry for English conversation. For example, I think that "Call me later" is Ok.
>>Correct But Ella, notice it to me that "Call me up later.
>>But teacher Ella noticed it and asked me to say "Call me up later." instead.
>>It's ok to say "Call me later, but it is more proper to say, "Call me up later."The "Up" should be inputted in this sentence.
>>The word "up" must be added in this sentence.
Hehe! let me know your answer!
>>Correct
>>Hehe! Let me know your answer! (Capital letter for every first letter of the first word in your sentence)
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