Today is monday.

2011-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

Monday is tired a little after having last weekend. But these days is better than before 1 years because I had did something for weekend. There was church meeting on saturday and was worship until 10 oclock night. So these days is better. I have studied english at that time that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Thank you for sharing with me the things you\'ve done this weekend. I hope you\'ll enjoy a lot more.   Have a nice day!! ^_^ -Tiny^0^ Monday is tired a little after having last weekend. >>I\'m a little bit tired this Monday after having my weekend.But these days is better than before 1 years because I had did something for weekend. >>But these days are better than 1 year ago because I have done something for the weekend.There was church meeting on saturday and was worship until 10 oclock night. >>There was a church meeting last Saturday and a worship until 10 o\'clock in the evening.So these days is better. >>So these days are better.I have studied english at that time that. >>I also studied English during that time.  

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