Today is monday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Monday is tired a little after having last weekend.
But these days is better than before 1 years because
I had did something for weekend.
There was church meeting on saturday and was worship until 10 oclock
night.
So these days is better.
I have studied english at that time that.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Thank you for sharing with me the things you\'ve done this weekend.
I hope you\'ll enjoy a lot more. Have a nice day!! ^_^
-Tiny^0^
Monday is tired a little after having last weekend.
>>I\'m a little bit tired this Monday after having my weekend.But these days is better than before 1 years because I had did something for weekend.
>>But these days are better than 1 year ago because I have done something for the weekend.There was church meeting on saturday and was worship until 10 oclock night.
>>There was a church meeting last Saturday and a worship until 10 o\'clock in the evening.So these days is better.
>>So these days are better.I have studied english at that time that.
>>I also studied English during that time.
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