today is my favorite holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm impressed your feedback
Thank you for your kind of response
I'm very interested in your feedback and I'm expecting it.
today is going to end of holiday
I'm anxioused about things that starts a new week
everyone called it a Monday sympyom, did U heard it before?
I guess you must be undergoing it like me
But,After went a monday,I usually noticed that my work is full of go,
I'm into my work for a week
amazingly starting a weekend, I even don't think about that,
You konw? I wantn't to do nothing ... Just take a relax.
today made me happy because i totally cleared up my home
as dish-washing,laundry,sweep,polish...
when I just saw my cleaned home, I'm full of happiness
Forwards I have to be diligent for my bappiness
Did you heard that Diligence is the mother of success ?
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you very much! I really am so fond of reading the compositions you write in here. I am glad that you are anticipating my responses/feedbacks. I know about the Monday Blues you are talking about, but I usually don’t have that. I am usually happy on Mondays. There were times when I feel down in the dumps. It commonly occurs on Wednesdays. :D Monday is always great for me because I make my mind happy. It is the beginning of the week. Whatever mood I have on Mondays, I usually take it ‘till the end of the week. Last weekend was pretty normal. I did some household chores and did some errands as well. Anyway, I hope you’ll have a great week ahead!
XOXO, Jenny
I'm impressed your feedback
>> I’m impressed with your feedback.Thank you for your kind of response.
>>Thank you for your kind response.I'm very interested in your feedback and I'm expecting it.
>> I’m very interested in your feedback and I am going to expect it.today is going to end of holiday
>> Today is the end of the holidays.I'm anxioused about things that starts a new week
>> I am anxious about things at the start of the new week.everyone called it a Monday sympyom, did U heard it before?
>>Everyone calls it a Monday Syndrome. Have you heard about this term before?
>> Everyone calls it a Monday sickness/Monday Blues. I guess you must be undergoing it like me
>> I guess you must be feeling the same thing as me.But,After went a monday,I usually noticed that my work is full of go,
>> But, after Mondays, I usually notice that I am on the go on my work.I'm into my work for a week amazingly starting a weekend,
>> I’m get into my week especially when the weekend is approaching.
I even don't think about that,
>> I don’t even think about that. You konw? I wantn't to do nothing ... Just take a relax.
>> You know what? I don’t want to do nothing. I just want to relax.today made me happy because i totally cleared up my home
>>This day made me happy because I totally cleaned my home up. as dish-washing,laundry,sweep,polish...
>> I did dish-washing, laundry, sweeping and polishing the floor.when I just saw my cleaned home, I'm full of happiness
>> When I saw my clean home, I was filled with happiness.
>> When I see my clean home, I am filled with happiness.Forwards I have to be diligent for my bappiness
>>Therefore, I have to be diligent to be happy. Did you heard that Diligence is the mother of success ?
>> Did you hear that Diligence is the mother of Success?
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