Today is sunny on sunday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, sir [이름]! :)
How was your day?
I hope you don\'t feel tired today.
I\'m sorry to hear about what happened to your chickens.
I hope you can resolve things with your neighbor soon. :p
I am looking forward to seeing you in class!
Take care and enjoy the rest of your Tuesday afternoon.
--- Teacher JACEY ^_^)/
It is sunny here today
>> It is sunny here today.
>> OR : It is a fine day today.
I planted an azalea at my farm today
>> I planted an azalea at my farm today.
And then I planted some lettuce
>> And then I also planted some lettuce.
I went grocery shopping
>> I went grocery shopping and I bought some fruits and pork.
>> OR : I went to the grocery store today and I purchased some fruits and pork.
I\'m mad Because I got off work and went home by the way The chickens were dead
>> I\'m mad because when I got off work and went home, I found out that the chickens were dead.
>> OR : I\'m furious because when I got off work and went home, I discovered that the chickens were dead.
If I could have only one food for the rest of my life
>> If I could have only one food for the rest of my life, I will choose rice, because it is an important source of nutrient.
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