Today is sunny on sunday

2017-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

학생이 쓴 원문

It is sunny here today I planted an azalea at my farm today And then I planted some lettuce I went grocery shopping So I bought some fruit and some pork I'm mad Because I got off work and went home by the way The chickens were dead If I could have only one food for the rest of my life I will choose the rice becuse rice is the important nutrient

강사 첨삭

Hello, sir [이름]! :)

How was your day?

I hope you don\'t feel tired today.


I\'m sorry to hear about what happened to your chickens.

I hope you can resolve things with your neighbor soon. :p


I am looking forward to seeing you in class!

Take care and enjoy the rest of your Tuesday afternoon.


--- Teacher JACEY ^_^)/



It is sunny here today

>> It is sunny here today.

>> OR : It is a fine day today.


I planted an azalea at my farm today

>> I planted an azalea at my farm today.


And then I planted some lettuce 

>> And then I also planted some lettuce.

I went grocery shopping
>> I went grocery shopping and I bought some fruits and pork.

>> OR : I went to the grocery store today and I purchased some fruits and pork.


I\'m mad Because I got off work and went home by the way The chickens were dead
>> I\'m mad because when I got off work and went home, I found out that the chickens were dead.

>> OR : I\'m furious because when I got off work and went home, I discovered that the chickens were dead.


If I could have only one food for the rest of my life 
>> If I could have only one food for the rest of my life, I will choose rice, because it is an important source of nutrient.

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