Today is talking about the island of South korea.
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Hi, Kelly!
It's very wet.
Today is talking about island of South korea.
According to the Ministry of Land, we have about 3,215.
494 of them inhabited and the rest are uninhabited.
Jeju lsland is the largest of them.There is one of the world's natural beauty seven by chosen the UNESCO.
Personally, I love the Oedo. The place is filled with beautiful flowers. so there is good to travel in the spring.
I want to show you when you have a time.(^^)//
How many island are there in the Philippines?
The Philippines have so many beautiful islands for example Cebu, Boracay. etc. I hope a chance traveling the Boracay.
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Hello there!
Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections below.
- T.Kelly -
It's very wet.
>> Correct.Today is talking about island of South korea.
>> Today, I'm going to talk about an island in South Korea.According to the Ministry of Land, we have about 3,215.
>> Correct.494 of them inhabited and the rest are uninhabited.
>> Correct.Jeju lsland is the largest of them.
>> Correct.
There is one of the world's natural beauty seven by chosen the UNESCO.
>> It is chosen by UNESCO as one of the seven wonders of the world.Personally, I love the Oedo.
>> Correct.
The place is filled with beautiful flowers. so there is good to travel in the spring.
>> The place is filled with beautiful flowers, so it is good to go there in spring.I want to show you when you have a time.(^^)//
>> I want to show it to you when you have time.How many islands are there in the Philippines?
>> Correct.The Philippines has so many beautiful islands for example Cebu, Boracay. etc.
>> Correct.
I hope a chance traveling the Boracay.
>> I hope to have a chance to travel to Boracay.
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