Today is tuesday.

Have you seen a day of the week's dog photo. It present dog's face of a day of the week. Dog's face is gloomy on monday and angly on wendesday. So It is changed to good face on saturday. It is very fun. I saw this photo a week ago. I had laughed then. Have a nice day~

 

Hi [이름]!!! Thank you for doing your composition and sharing something about what you\'ve seen in a dog\'s photo. It was very interesting!  I\'ll see you in our class later. Have a nice day. Take care. ^_^

 

Here are my corrections:

Have you seen a day of the week\'s dog photo.

>> Have you seen the day to day dog photo of the week?
It present dog\'s face of a day of the week.

>> It presents the dog\'s face everyday for a week.
Dog\'s face is gloomy on monday and angly on wedesday.
>> The dog\'s face is gloomy on Monday and angry on Wednesday.

So It is changed to good face on saturday.

>> And then it changes to good face on Saturday.
It is very fun.

>> Correct!
I saw this photo a week ago.

>> Correct!
I had laughed then.
>> Since then I always laugh.
Have a nice day~

>> Correct!