Today is very sad

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I have a dog. her name is KKamgi. she has lived for five years with me. I am very sad becouse she is sick. it is serious for me. maybe she will go to heaven. If she die, I will cry everyday. I hope she is getting well.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!I am really sorry to hear about your dog… I hope she will get well soon.. Don’t worry, just take good care of her and everything will be alright.. Let’s hope for the best ok? T. Karen I have a dog. her name is KKamgi. >> I have a dog. Her name is KKamgi.she has lived for five years with me. >> Correct!!I am very sad becouse she is sick. >> I am very sad because she is sick.it is serious for me.  >> Correct!!maybe she will go to heaven. >> Correct!!If she die, I will cry everyday. >> Correct!!I hope she is getting well. >> Correct!!

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