Today is very sad
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a dog. her name is KKamgi.
she has lived for five years with me.
I am very sad becouse she is sick.
it is serious for me.
maybe she will go to heaven.
If she die, I will cry everyday.
I hope she is getting well.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!I am really sorry to hear about your dog…
I hope she will get well soon.. Don’t worry, just take good care of her and everything will be alright..
Let’s hope for the best ok?
T. Karen
I have a dog. her name is KKamgi.
>> I have a dog. Her name is KKamgi.she has lived for five years with me.
>> Correct!!I am very sad becouse she is sick.
>> I am very sad because she is sick.it is serious for me.
>> Correct!!maybe she will go to heaven.
>> Correct!!If she die, I will cry everyday.
>> Correct!!I hope she is getting well.
>> Correct!!
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