Today is very tired but I can do it

2018-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I think I wanna make friends. Because I wanna meet many foreigner. My father always said me “you have to think about international and then you can have your dream. So I think If I already really good in English languge, I will speak in English with many foreigner and I will learn

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I think I wanna make friends. Because I wanna meet many foreigner.

>> I think I want to make friends. Because, I want to meet foreign friends.



My father always said me “you have to think about international and then you can have your dream.

>> My Father always tell me \"You have to think about being international and then you can have your dream.\"



So I think If I already really good in English languge, I will speak in English with many foreigner and I will learn

>> So, I think if I\'m already really good in the English language, I will speak in English with a lot of foreigners and I can learn from them.




Words to avoid:


Instead of using \"wanna\" you can use \"want to\"


and instead of using \"many\" you can use \"a lot of\"


it sound more formal ^^ and so that you won\'t get used on using \"wanna\" and \"many\" :)


 

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