Today is warmer than yesterday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is warmer than yesterday.
But it was snowing in this morning about 5 cm.
The ground is slipery.
On a second thought, today is friday.
But I don't happy because I am busy.
I cannot help studying English conversation in this weekend.
I will see English movie.
I will hear English song.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!!
Well, today is the opposite for me here in the Philippines... It's getting colder and colder here..Maybe this will go on until February..Anyway, watching English movies and listening to English songs would be a great idea..It will help you a lot in pronunciation and with the basic expressions..Have fun on that!!See you in class!!
T. Shy
But it was snowing in this morning about 5 cm.>> But it was snowing this morning about 5 cm. deep.The ground is slipery.>> The ground is slippery.>> The streets are slippery.But I don't happy because I am busy.>> But I'm not happy because I am busy.I cannot help studying English conversation in this weekend.>> I cannot help studying English conversation this weekend.I will see English movie.>> I will see an English movie.>> I will watch an English movie.I will hear English song. >> I will listen to English songs.
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