Today issue is about PA nurses of Korea Medical Union
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I am a generous person. I did my best to understand my staff and I will do that.
I want to talk about medical union in Korea in yesterday newspaper
I heard about PA nurses. Other word is EPN nurses.
They work something instead of doctor. But that is for doctors not nurses. Nurses did not have a license for perscription.
I wii give more information to you about issue.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
See you in later in our class ^^
Dear [Name].
I am a generous person. I did my best to understand my staff and I will do that.
>> I am a generous person. I did my best to understand my staff and I will continue to do that.
I want to talk about medical union in Korea in yesterday newspaper
>> I want to talk about medical union in Korea in yesterday\'s newspaper.
I heard about PA nurses. Other word is EPN nurses.
>> I heard about PA nurses. The other word or term is EPN nurses.
They work something instead of doctor. But that is for doctors not nurses. Nurses did not have a license for perscription.
>> They did the work instead of the doctors but that specific line of work are for doctors not for nurses. Nurses did not have a license for prescription and surgeries.
I wii give more information to you about issue.
>> I will give more information to you about this issue.
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