Today , it.s too hard.!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was snowing a lot.
Yesterday, My daughter\'s boots are torn.
So, after they drop in school, I went to shoes store.
I bought daughter\'s boots. And it brought to her.
However, I had a accident. ㅠㅠ
My car slipped a road. And dump it another car.
But it\'s small accident. becouse this car was parking and noting in the car.
I was so suprised. ㅠㅠ
And get stressed.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름] [이름]. I\'m sorry to hear about your day. I hope the situation was resolved easily. Your sentence structure is improving, and you are beginning to use more complex sentences. Keep up the good work. Stay safe and I hope the road situation gets better. See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Today was snowing a lot.
>> CORRECT
Yesterday, My daughter\'s boots are torn.
>> Yesterday, my daughter\'s boots were torn.
So, after they drop in school, I went to shoes store.
>> So after I dropped them off at school I went to the shoe store.
I bought daughter\'s boots. And it brought to her.
>> I bought my daughter\'s boots and I brought them to her.
However, I had a accident. ㅠㅠ
>> However, I had an accident.
My car slipped a road. And dump it another car.
>> My car slipped on the road and I bumped into another car.
But it\'s small accident. becouse this car was parking and noting in the car.
>> It was a small accident because he was parking his car.
I was so suprised. ㅠㅠ And get stressed.
>> I was so surprised and stressed.
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