Today my brother shoting in my class

2016-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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Today my brother shoting in my class and my feelings are it's fun but i confused and my brother is very comtable and i like my brother and Teacher and me laghing for my brother and Today's activity was very fun!!! Thank you very much Teacher !!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Benjamin! ^^

 

Happy Friday! You and your brother did great today.

I also had fun! Keep it up and study harder!!

Til next time!!

 

Teacher Carmen ^^

 

Today my brother shoting in my class and my feelings are it\'s fun but i confused and my brother is very comtable and i like my brother and Teacher and me laghing for my brother

>> My brother joined in our class today. I had a fun time. I\'m also confused because my brother feels very comfortable. I like my brother. My teacher and I were laughing at him.

and Today\'s activity was very fun!!!

>> Today\'s activity was very fun!!!

Thank you very much Teacher!!!!!!!!

>> Thank you very much, teacher!!!!

 

 

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