today our class, there is the story i wanna talk you/homework
학생이 쓴 원문
after ending our class, i review today\\\\\\\'s class.
people bow their head for older people.
i traveld many country. england, paris, hongkong, taiwan, japan, china
i like traveling. my favorite country is england.
i love their accent. and there are a lot of beautiful buildings. the buildings i saw on my way in england are like art. (영국에서 내가 길을 걷는 길에 본 모든건물들이 마치 예술같았다), although they are old buildings.
homework:do you like meeting new people?
i don\\\'t like meeting new people. because i\\\'m very shy, i have difficult in talking to new people. i want to change my personality.but it\\\'s not easy. i wanna communicate well with someone meeting first and make friends with them. after i came in seoul, i\\\'m always alone.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
after ending our class, i review today\\\\\\\'s class.
>> After our class, I reviewed our lesson.
people bow their head for older people.
>> People bow their heads to other\'s who are older than them.
i traveld many country. england, paris, hongkong, taiwan, japan, china
>> I have been to many countries, such as England, Paris, Hongkong, Taiwan, Japan, and China.
i like traveling. my favorite country is england.
>> I like traveling and my favorite country is England.
i love their accent. and there are a lot of beautiful buildings.
>> I love their accent. and it has a lot of beautiful buildings.
the buildings i saw on my way in england are like art. (영국에서 내가 길을 걷는 길에 본 모든건물들이 마치 예술같았다), although they are old buildings.
>> The buildings in England are like art, although they are old.
i don\\\'t like meeting new people.
>> I don\'t like meeting new people.
because i\\\'m very shy, i have difficult in talking to new people.
>> Because I\'m very shy, and I have difficulty talking to new people.
I want to change my personality.
>> I want to change that personality.
but it\\\'s not easy.
>> But it\'s not easy.
i wanna communicate well with someone meeting first and make friends with them.
>> I want to communicate well with someone I meet the first time and make friends with them.
after i came in seoul, i\\\'m always alone.
>> After coming to Seoul, I have always been alone.
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