Today's absent

2010-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Dear [Name]... Hi, When you called me at the first time, I was riding a bus to go office. So, I requested to talk after 5 mins... When you called me later, it was over 9 am. I was atteding morning meeting at that time. SO,,I couldn't answer your call Sorry;;;;;;;;;;;;;

강사 첨삭

Hi,[이름]!..Wow, you had a hectic schedule. Hope you’re still doing fine. I’ll just call you again tomorrow. Hopefully, you will not be busy by that time. Take care! Here are some corrections in your sentences. See you!Just keep on smiling always!   Dear [Name]...Hi,When you called me at the first time, I was riding a bus to go office. >When you called me the first time, I was riding a bus going to my office. So, I requested to talk after 5 mins... >So, I requested to call me again after 5 mins. When you called me later, it was over 9 am.>But when you called me again, it was passed 9 am. I was atteding morning meeting at that time. >I was attending a morning meeting at that time.SO,,I couldn't answer your call >correctSorry;;;;;;;;;;;;; >correct

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