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Thank you for doing it!

English is indeed indispensable, for it opens a lot of opportunities.

I am very happy that you are determined to master this exciting language!

I am always proud of you, my dear!

Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think it has more benefits than problems?

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 Ok!~Actually, nowadays, many Korean students study abroad to have lots of experiences over the world.

>>Ok!~Actually, nowadays, many Korean students study abroad to have lots of experience over the world.

 Most of all, I agree on the opinion that, for higher studies, the students have to have some experience in oversea.

>>Most of all, I agree on the opinion that, for higher studies, the students have to have some experience overseas.
In our modern society, English has quickly become essential to our daily lives.

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Also, in Korea, speaking and writing English well can get a job easily.

>>Also, in Korea,  a person who can speak and write English well can get a job easily.

That is, the English skill enables us to get a good job in Korea.

>>That is, English skill enables us to get a good job in Korea.

So, not only middle or high school students but also undergraduate or graduate students tend to move to a different country. 

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 Nowadays, there are a lot of foreigners throughout the world.

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So, for us to adjust this environment and to commuicate with them, we have to speak English very well.

>>So, for us to adjust to this environment and to communicate with them, we have to speak English very well.

 Of course, we can study English in Korea.

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 However, there is little opportunity to come in contact with English in Korea.

>> However, there are a few opportunities to communicate in English in Korea.