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I was sick during weekends
so I went to a hospital yesterday.
and it turned out that I had gastritis.
It causes from a lot of stress or salt and spicy foods or unregular diet.
I have to take care because it's easy to happen again.(recurrence)
The doctor gave me just medicine for three days.
I used to release stress by binge eating.
but It make me gain weight and is also something that can cause gastritis.
so in order to avoid recurrence and weight fluctuation
I'm going to maintain my weight by working out.
Some people justify saying "It's okay. I work out."
but they did not. in the end they gain weight.
in that case, they will get gastritis like me.. ㅠㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I was glad to hear from you today. I am hoping for your complete recovery from gastritis. Take care and have a good day!
T. JanE ^^
I was sick during weekends so I went to a hospital yesterday.>> I was sick last weekend, so I went to the hospital yesterday.
and it turned out that I had gastritis.>> Correct
It causes from a lot of stress or salt and spicy foods or unregular diet.>> It was caused by stress, or salty and spicy foods, or irregular diet.
I have to take care because it\'s easy to happen again.(recurrence)>> I have to be careful because it may happen again.
The doctor gave me just medicine for three days.>> The doctor just gave me medicine for three days. I used to release stress by binge eating.>> Correct
but It make me gain weight and is also something that can cause gastritis.>> It made me gain weight, and I learned that it may also cause gastritis.
so in order to avoid recurrence and weight fluctuation I\'m going to maintain my weight by working out.>> Correct Some people justify saying \"It\'s okay. I work out.\">> Some people justify themselves by saying, \"It\'s okay, I work out.\"
but they did not. >> But they don\'t.
in the end they gain weight.>> Correct
in that case, they will get gastritis like me.. ㅠㅠㅠ >> Correct
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