today's class

2015-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I can't wait to have a class with you on next Monday. but I can't just help it. There is only way that I have to prepare for next class perfectly! today, I prepared each day's class as if I prepare a big presentation. Here is my yesterday's diary. Have a nice weekend! I had a tea set for present from my Japanese friend through international post. It has not been so much time that young people enjoy tea in Korea. It just has been popular with adults and the old. But today, There are many people who are interested in their health. Young people also enjoy it. you can see that easily even at coffee shop. I just new that Japan has the oldest tea tradition in many parts of the world. but other than that I don't know anything about it. as he said, Japan exports various kind of tea materials and the most terrible thing is that they even put tea into a rice bowl and mix them to eat.. but I have to understand because it's their custom..

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition! I appreciate your effort in preparing well for our class. Don\'t overdo it though, do push yourself too hard. You\'re doing pretty well, so take it easy. Take care and enjoy the weekend! T. JanE ^^ I can\'t wait to have a class with you on next Monday.>> I can\'t wait to have class with you on Monday.  But I can\'t just help it.>> Correct There is only way that I have to prepare for next class perfectly!>> This is the only way I can prepare for the next class perfectly!  today, I prepared each day\'s class as if I prepare a big presentation.>> Today, I prepared for each day\'s class as if I prepared for a big presentation.  Here is my yesterday\'s diary.>> Correct Have a nice weekend!>> Correct I had a tea set for present from my Japanese friend through international post.>> I received a tea set as a present through an international post from my Japanese friend.  It has not been so much time that young people enjoy tea in Korea.>> Correct It just has been popular with adults and the old.>> Before, it was popular only among adults and elderly.  But today, There are many people who are interested in their health.>> But these days, many people are conscious about their health.  Young people also enjoy it. >> Correct you can see that easily even at coffee shop. >> You can easily notice than even in coffee shops.  I just new that Japan has the oldest tea tradition in many parts of the world.>> I just discovered that Japan has the oldest tea tradition in many parts of the world.  But other than that I don\'t know anything about it.>> Correct as he said, Japan exports various kind of tea materials and the most terrible thing is that they even put tea into a rice bowl and mix them to eat..>> He said, Japan exports various kinds of tea materials, and the most terrible thing is that they even mix tea with a bowl of rice.  But I have to understand because it\'s their custom.. >> Correct

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