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Hi Jane. in this composition,I would write what I couldn't express during our class. I told you about the movie that I watched last weekend. first of all, the movie is about a life of a father fighting for his family in 1950 Korea war broke out. This is the hottest movie in Korea now. Some say Korean young people have to watch this movie to remind of the pain of war, and the victim and their ancestors. The most impressive to me was that my grand father was related to the generation. I guess my father watched the movie missing his father. I saw him trying to hold his tear. It made me so sad. And I told you, I don't feel satisfied after workout because I don't work out as hard as I feel satisfied. those are exactly what I really wanted to express to you. Thank you for your correction. Let's start this weekend brightly !!

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! That must be a good movie to watch. It may not be good for me though, because I like movies that can make me laugh. My mood gets easily affected by what I watch or read, so I always choose happy ones. Take care and thanks for sharing! Have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane.>> Correct In this composition, I would write what I couldn\'t express during our class.>> Correct I told you about the movie that I watched last weekend.>> Correct First of all, the movie is about a life of a father fighting for his family in 1950 Korea war broke out.>> First of all, the movie is about a life of a father fighting for his family in 1950, when the Korean war broke out.  This is the hottest movie in Korea now.>> Correct Some say Korean young people have to watch this movie to remind of the pain of war, and the victim and their ancestors.>> Some say that Korean young people have to watch this movie to remind them of the pain of war, the victims, and their ancestors.  The most impressive to me was that my grand father was related to the generation.>> The most impressive thing to me was that my grandfather belonged to that generation.  I guess my father watched the movie missing his father.>> Correct I saw him trying to hold his tear. It made me so sad.>> Correct And I told you, I don\'t feel satisfied after workout because I don\'t work out as hard as I feel satisfied.>> Correct Those are exactly what I really wanted to express to you.>> Correct Thank you for your correction.>> Correct Let\'s start this weekend brightly !! >> Let\'s start this week brightly!