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Hi my tutor It's my diary, I want you to correct it please~ Have a nice day I adopted a sing of guinea pig from friend last weekend. I tossed and turn tonight because they are know for making squeaking sounds. when I decided to adopt them I didn't know that.. To make matter worse.. I've found that they are social animals that like to live in small groups. so I should adopt one more guinea pig. and I saw an article, In Sweden Keeping just one is against law. but those are not problems. even though I can't afford it any more I like them. Plus.. bonding experience mean a feeling that connects between animals.

Hi there, [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! This is well-written. Here are some few suggestions for you to make it better. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Hi my tutor>> Correct It\'s my diary, I want you to correct it please~>> Correct Have a nice day>> Correct I adopted a sing of guinea pig from friend last weekend.>> Last weekend, I adopted a guinea pig from my friend. I tossed and turn tonight because they are know for making squeaking sounds.>> I tossed and turned last night because they are known for making squeaking sounds. when I decided to adopt them I didn\'t know that..>> Correct To make matter worse..I\'ve found that they are social animals that like to live in small groups.>> To make matters worse, I found out that they are social animals that like to live in small groups. so I should adopt one more guinea pig.>> Correct and I saw an article, In Sweden Keeping just one is against law.>> According to an article that I read, in Sweden, keeping just one guinea pig is against the law. but those are not problems. >> But that\'s not a problem. even though I can\'t afford it any more I like them. >> Even though I can\'t afford to have another one, I like it. Plus.. bonding experience mean a feeling that connects between animals. >> Bonding experience means a feeling of being connected with animals.